Some tryings about Eymir

From start to end, every critic change proces of project. Especially after prejury, my project really encounter some problems and still I work on how can i improve something. In this post you can see my ideas which are mostly do not have any relation

1/200 SCALED PLAN MODELS

Here is my first idea about pier. I just want to make connection with lake and reeds. For reaching this aim There is both upside and downside places. Upside one is not work and downside one should be improve. So I abandon this idea.

In there, my plan is related with defining enclosure areas but almost whole of the studio work on this kind of structure. I still do not give up this idea but in my 1/200 scaled model I work like this in whole of model. So it seems like still valid in Jury but Im not sure how can I apply this

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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